well poems arent supposed to describe every little detail, are they? |
i mean they can, but some are better with some mystery. plus i couldnt write that part in without changing the meaning |
sorry, im being evil (and commenting on my own poem numerous times), thank you for reviewing, =) |
by Lushed
wow. i absolutly fall in love with all of your poems! theyre so wonderful!! |
I love it so much! Especially the part "an angel without wings"! 5/5 TOTALLY! |
Very sweet I enjoy your rhyme shceme and how it is written. Well written! Great job keep it up. |
by Kris Lynn
Awesome. I can describe it as just that. Awesome. Keep it up. |