Hey i thought it was really good!!, all your words rhymed, adn when they ryme they soudn alot better!!!, check ut some of my poems i love te hear what people think!!

Hey i noticed that you left me a comment on my poem titles im not, well thank you i really appreciate it i love getting comments i hate it when NO ONE comments OR vote!! It stinks, but i really like this poem i think thats awesome!! you shoudl talk to this guy he will never know if you dont!! well i am gonan read some of your other poems so i will talk to you later!