-in response to you comments :)- Yes it does suck to be 18, but at 30 your mum still treats you like a child? Wow..And the other comment, my mind wanders something cronic at times and inspiration often comes from simple things like being yelled at? ;X. Anyway enough of my babble, girl. This is a very well written poem...lo0ks to me asthough you are a very talented poet.

-love you, love me-
Kalah

this poem is very insightful...thank you for showing me how others think of their mothers...i have only hated my mother a couple times but i can totally relate to what you're saying....

gosh that ones really good too infact they all are...i wish i had the nerve to tell my mom that too...i just wish i could tell her i want her to love me unconditionally..so i know excatly how you feel