America the great...NOT!

by Monique   Jan 2, 2005


America is wonderful!
Every thing\'s just fine!
Even though the govt will be threatened by this rhyme.

I feel the need to share with you all
how Americans feel the need to stand proud and tall.

The American govt is like a dictatorship,
full of themselves,
and full of shit.

\"America the free!\"
remember that?
if America was free,
then why slavery?

In the past it was named,
that American citizens had the right to impeach an unjust govt,
why not now?
truth:we know not how.

We know not how to get along
without an over-powering force,
or influential songs.

Before you sleep for the night,
think to yourself;
is the way America operates right?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Monique

    well....I'm black, but I listen to hip hop, rap, punk, r&b, metal, alternitive/emo (everything but country.) I had the American gov't and gov't in general. It's corrupt and ignorant.

  • 19 years ago

    by Monique

    thanks guys! :o)

  • 19 years ago

    by Edina

    hehe that was a great poem and i deffenitely agree with you! keep up the good work sweetie!!
    ~lots love

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Wow, this was amazing! I do agree with you! Because America shouldn't hold a name that is false! You know "the land of the free" well that's not what it is! But anyways wonderful job, absolutely just wonderful.

    Sincerely, Amanda

  • 19 years ago

    by *tears*

    I think that your are obviously a good poet just expressing your opinions. That is your point of view and everyone should respect that. Even if they don't agree with it, which I don't totally but I do partially, they should respect your opinions are different.

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