One day our love will be shared

by Thumbelina04   Jan 2, 2005


So this is how it ends
You and me separated
Being just friends

But when we first met
None of this was planned
Everyone knows that
Cause i wouldn't have took your hand

You smile at me
Often Stare
But now i know that
Your with her

Every kind word you say
Makes me want to cry
Cause at the minute it seems that it has to be a lie

You tell me that I'm gorgeous
All so special n great
But if all this is true
Would you please mind explaining
Why we are through

I just don't get it
I fail to see
How the person your loving
is not me

She's not all that pretty
And she thinks shes all that
She sees you as her trophy boy
Always treating you as her silly little toy

So when your done with her
Remember what I've said
I warned you about her
I said I still cared
And that maybe one day
Our love could be shared

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  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    da message dat u'v put in dis poem seems so strong, n its very effective! nicely written aswel! wicked! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by nickie

    Aww that's awesome hun ...I hope everything turns out alright in the end...

    xoxLovexox
    xOxNickieXoX

  • 19 years ago

    by saurabh_poeticheart

    hey there thnx for reading my poem. this one by u is great and deserves all 5.
    check out my other poems too

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    liked this poem, it flows well. keep fighting and holding on, maybe things will get better in the new year

    stay strong, lu -x-x-x-x-