I have to say, I don't usually like poems that aren't constant or follow a similar pattern. But I really enjoyed this. Great perception. Well done.

Wow fancy! I think this would work as a good song just put a beat and a chorus too it. Sorry my musician self just kicked in. But great poem! It really struck me.

wow, it's really really good, i like the fairytale idea, and the way it's twisted, such beautiful pretty images just slashed apart and tainted, awesome work!

emma x

i really like it. the fairy theme is creative and you worked it nicely. ;-)

wow, that was a really deep poem, i loved every word of it! the wording and descriptions were really good and you made really good points, keep it up! x x x x

I'd just like to say thank you to everyone who has commented! You are the ones who help me continue and improve!
luv kt

Mirror, mirror
Crack and shatter
Split to pieces
Why does it matter?
That nicely relates to the fairytale thing. Nefarious.

wow...this is really deep...i really really like it! im gonna add u to my fav...great job!

WOW absolutely beautiful! I'm adding you to my favs..I want to know when you write more poems!
-Lauren-