wow, again, beautiful. I love the romance in this peice, the symbols and intimate comparisons really add a dramatic effect to the emotion and impact the reader. I really liked the lines,
"savoring your ephemeral caress
like a delectable moment stolen
from the world’s battering chaos."
Those were just so beautifully put and the word choice added a pleasent and lovely effect to the piece. I also really admire the symbol of the "eternal mirror" I thought that was really lovely. Well done, excellent

Simply divine...as innocense enraptures a minor cynicism.
And again as so often before your poise is one of a kind.
Great job (5)