Comments : Identity

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    The shards impress me as the one's charecter and the jewel their core self.

    A well spoken, magnificent tale of soul searching.

  • 19 years ago

    by paperdoll

    You know, I don't even know if i should bother writing a comment so poetic as Adrienne or Elizabeth. Hmm.

    The point I ought to make, though, is that I found your poem immensly intriguing. Well thought out, truly written and poignantly poetic. It made me think, bluntly. And at about this point I give up on poetic commenting.

    -paperdoll