Awwww Wow... I loved this poem:) I'm speechless! ... Great work! Keep on writing! *Cheers to 2005*... God Bless your writing girl!.. *5/5*.........

~!~Bliss in the heavenly sky~!~
**Sedusha**

AWESOME! It's absolutely fantastic, the imagery in here is just mind blowing B***h face english teatcher would be proud I'm sure! I love the use of colour, and the places you chose to describe... Giza!? It's just beautiful! This is by far my favourite poem that you have EVER written! I loved it, it's wondorous beyond comprehension, and a totally fabulous read! (A lil long... just kidding) It rocks! Keep it up.

emma x