It's very sad and emotional but that's why I like it. Thanks for commenting on my poem. I have some others I'd like you to check out.
"Those Up Above"
"Your Choices"
Well actually if you could I'd like you to rate and comment on as much as you can. I'd love it

that has to be one of the best poems i have ever read. one of your best and no doubt about it. its amazing. u no im here. u'll never loose me unless you ask me to leave, you can always talk to me bout sht hun. really. im here, im holding the rainbow, waiting for you.
take care,
ellie

aw i hope ur ok babe, thts a very emotional poem n very upsetting, i really hope u get thru this!
keep up the gd work
x

Oh hun, amazing poem! i relli hope this year is a better one for u, u deserve so much more! xxxxxx