ur right but its good. its a really good dark poem. i couldnt rite something like that even if i tried. its great.
take care,
ellie

it may be a very dark poem but it is excellent you have great talent keep posting. Thanks for your comment much appreciated x

Like it. By the way thanks for commenting.

Hey, this is perty good...and i know how you feel...keep ur head up girl!! take care, and keep on writing...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Woah. Scary. Powerful. Emotional. Good Job. I loved it.