it sure was long... but it a cool poem!

thanx for the comment..i really enjoyed this poem..it was great!! keep it up...

it was a good poem -- but i'm confused -- ??

thats cute. is that really what happened and stuff?

like i can't really explain it why didn't you go straight to the point you like said things about the other dude that you liked -- so was it the same dude ?? or what? it was confusing !?

oh okay i get it now -- and i know how it is i was 13 and 14 -- the age i am now -- haha -- an thought i was in love with this 18 year old -- pfft yeah right he's sweet on the outside but a total ass at heart . ! grr ! boys ! life was so much easier when boys had cooties and close didn't have to match ! but that's okay i know who my first love was -- and still is and that is Harold Justin Griffith and even though we are on opposite sides of the country from each other .. i love him dearly and have since 3rd grade - ! and always will -- he was my first love - and that will NEVER change ! <33 -- i love you justin :]] -- yeah but it sucks b/c he doesn't love me :[ yet -- but on the show family matters She didn't fall in love with steve for 15 years .. so it's onl been 11 :]] haha -- j/k my life isn't a television show though i know :]] but -- anyways -- liked the poem def a five ;] love bye :]]

Hey :) First, im very glad you wrote a comment to my poem "Snow".. I really like this poem. You tell straight from the heart and thats a rare thing. Keep up the good work and please let me know when you write another poem :D

Deep thoughts- Miss Kruger