Comments : Conspiracy theory

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Wow incredible hun...totally brilliant...I get it too (I hope <3) Love it muches...and love u muches xxx Keep up your incredible, phenomenal, ammmaazzzinngggg, outstanding, extrodinary poems! =) <3 xxxxxxxxx love ya

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCareHunniexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    thats alot of adjectives(is that what they are) well anyways, thank you

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Aw so sad.. kinda physoctic.. yet I feel that way. o.o Anywho! I love the repitition! Keep up the good work!

  • 19 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    The paranoia is almost unbearable
    It’s pushing to my limit
    The paranoia is almost unbearable
    It’s telling me to end it

    Lovely suicidal para. A 5
    *v*

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    thank you all for your comments again, theyre all helpful

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    thanks,,, i was paranoid when i wrote it:P

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    Incredible....
    ...It's so quiet here all alone...
    I love that line....Love,
    E.

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    nice job!! keep it up!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Interesting form! I like the repetition.
    Good write!
    5/5