Ice cold knife ©

by Georgi   Jan 2, 2005


Ice cold knife
warm skin
quick sharp pain
dig it in

slice it across
wanting more
watch the blood
on the bathroom floor

cry with pain,
shaking arm
push it deeper
its called self harm

take it out
look at you!
your a mess
you know it true

wipe the blood
one last look
at the broken life
that you almost took

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  • 19 years ago

    by quick&painless

    very good poem. you are a very talented writer. keep it up. 5/5
    -katie

  • 19 years ago

    by Lmay

    wow so much meaning in so few words, very powerful! i give you a five!
    Love always Lmay xXx

  • 19 years ago

    by ..::Angel of your darkness::..

    not bad, i like it
    could be made in a bit more detail though
    well done

  • 19 years ago

    by StormySkies

    I like it, like mine but not as messy and all over the place. Nice work.
    Jess

  • 19 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    uhhh it was a good poem altough it lacks of emotion(no OFFENSE) IT WAS pretty well written dont get mad its an honest comment but at the and it was great work i loved it

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