reading it like that makes it so sad, but it really is a good poem

so true , **5** gain ;) , luv lidxxXxx

Your a good poet

wow, VeeeRy impressive (with a capital V) it really brings home the feelings x

ps. does this comment even make sense?! lol lmao

O, wow, very powerful ending. Loved it, I may just put it on my wall :) x x x x

hey whats up well i guess u read my poem and your poem is awesome because it seems like its my life well be safe ok write me @ sk8erchik2003123@yahoo.com

lmao!!! fun times!! I'm gonna go around now asking people if frogs have penises!! Ciao!!!

hehehehe yay! lol! xxxxxx

so jealous... wish i could write like you... lol. (p.s. just tried the salt n ice thing- fun fun fun! lol)

i know! SALT AND ICE ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

woah...that was really good! And just fyi, I loved the movie 13!!! Best movie ever:) Anyways great job keep it up

i love this poem...its short but it has emotion..love it!! keep it up!! :)

lol i love your work! great job! hehe 5/5

much love
savannah

Wow!! this this really good

COOOL!!

i love this poem ... still .... i said i'd put it on my wall an i did, it's still there, right by my pillow, i read it almost every day, and i still love it :) x

I liked the way you wrote this...I liked the emotion you used... great work...I really like this part cry with pain,
shaking arm
push it deeper
its called self harm....
Xox Sherrie

Great poem, girl.

short but great.

I sure hope you're a girl, now!

Keep writing=)

..sad but hey thats life and so are mine...great poem keep it up! and thanks so much for your comment!
xxxChristinaxxx

great poem...it describes my life almost perfectly. thanks for the comment on my poems
Tamra