uhhh it was a good poem altough it lacks of emotion(no OFFENSE) IT WAS pretty well written dont get mad its an honest comment but at the and it was great work i loved it

I like it, like mine but not as messy and all over the place. Nice work.
Jess

not bad, i like it
could be made in a bit more detail though
well done

wow so much meaning in so few words, very powerful! i give you a five!
Love always Lmay xXx

very good poem. you are a very talented writer. keep it up. 5/5
-katie