you did a great job wow talk about inspiring....thanks! i love your work :) |
by Natalie84
I'm speechless, wow....great poem! I mean it! I really loved it....I personally don't go to church, I don't think that I have to go to church to have faith. In so many ways church has become something that I don't want to be a part of anyway. The pastor molesting kids, people talking about eachother, who looks the best....yada yada yada Anyway again terrific poem!! |
You are right I really did like this poem. Very beautiful! Great job. 5/5. |
by Lyn
I love the punchline. It was worth waiting for and the poem kept my interest. I do like shorter poems but this was good. |
by Just Me
Good job!!! |