....wow. I've been rendered speechless....There was so much power behind your words....Excellent work.
lots of love,
~Krystle~ XX

That was really good all i can say is WOW WOW WOW i give it a 5!!!!!!!!

aaaww, still a beautiful lil poem though, almost got me crying, nice job.

emma x

very veeerrrrry good mate.......keep writing. you really are one of the best here, and i do not understand, but thats quite alright. would you check mine out please?? the thing i love best about your poem is the word phrasing. its not 4 or 6 syllables in each line but rather 8 or 10.....it makes it more interesting. i gave it a 5 mate......ah wellll ive got to run......

-YOLANDE THE DREAMER

well i really like this a lot, and ya i think i understand it! lol... very sad
keep up the great writing,
-Mols

Good poem, good poem. Very well done.