hey that was a great poem i think you did a great job

That was a really good poem, and it shows exactly the kind of pressure girls feel under to be thin! Chack out some of mine if you want.

I really like this poem! Great job! =)

Hey...well thanks for the "good poem" part...and I know you dont just all of a sudden decide to be anorexic...I never said that... and i never said anything about anyone WANTING to be anorexic, but just WANTING to be thin. And thinking anorexia is the only way to get thin.

Not bad. Not really to my tastes, but I like more deep poems with um...bigger words, shall we say, that will force me to think outside the square. Still, not bad.

i know how bad the pressure is to be a stick.. i set myself to be realistic though.. like, some curves. nehoo, awesome poem! keep it up!

vedali

yes be yourself.. great poem well written

can u have a read of mine..
.'doors of my heart have opened wide' ?

and also some of my latest poems...would mean alot ..thank you

Wow this is so good. Very powerful. Well written. Keep it up.

Love,
Tiff

Hey i loved that poem. I know exactly what its like to have anorexia... I have recently been diagnosed with anorexia and they are the reasons with why i started starving myself! Well i hope you never go through it... Keep up the good work!