The Sweetest Star

by Luke   Jan 3, 2005


Do you see these wounds?
The metal in my flesh-
Can you tell, it's a wonder-
My heart was pierced by the flack

A.A. guns shoot,
Across my Autumn sky-
Whitecaps on the sea-
that is the river Styx

This was my decision-
Sweet solitary confinement,
I found the meaning to derive-
That hallow heartbreak is a constant,

Bandages cover my face-
It was so bloody...
Tourniquets-my facade-
covered from my body,

This is the story of pain-
Stellar Star in the sky,
The goal that some perceive-
even such a saint

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  • 19 years ago

    by Aya

    very deep. nice one.

  • 19 years ago

    by Incognito

    So then which are your weird ones. I wasn't trying to be mean when i said what are you on, your poem just seemed a little whack to me.

  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    Wow the repetoir of the poem is really neat...Love how you use the imagery into pain. Quite Good!

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    hey its me, thnx 4 ur commnt on my work, it reli meant alot. dis poem is reli gud, well dun. x

  • 19 years ago

    by Hannah Leigh Pate

    Wow, that was really beautiful and dark. I liked all of your poems... I added you to my favorites...=P heeheehee. Keep up the good work.

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