Absolutely beautiful. I agree, your grandmother would be proud. You really know to bring out the emotion. Awesome. *v*

thanks guys =] i really need the support...

great poem 5/5. im sorry about your grandma, I dont know how it feels like, but i will in the up coming years. thanks for commenting on my poems.

-kaylyn-

That was great, I love the way you express yourself, not many can as the way you do, keep it up, I know what its like, I lost my grandpa. But sadly, I had kept myself detatched from him, afraid of the hurt I would face once he was gone, now all i feel is regret, but not loss or miss. How can you miss something you've never had?

i'm really sorry about your grandpa...great poem!
*britt*

I change to the other poems that I read on here. A nice change though.

Starting with a nursery rhyme gets the mind thinking.

Keep Writing

Nici

aww great poem girl...keep up the good work

Very touching poem.
I especially liked these lines:
If I could only pick you from my dreams
And hug you for real, I always would.

I'm sure alot of people feel like that, variation of reasons though.
Take care of yourself
All my love,
Laura.