by ShatteredAngel Jan 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
10 last seconds to change my mind |
by Saving Grace
Wow.. Its unique, and very well written. I loved the rhyme scheme, it worked really well, and wasn't forced. Its a powerful write, very intense and emotional. Flows well throughout the entire poem also. I really enjoyed the read. Great work. |
by Em
It's short and lovely |
by tragic
Wow that was intense! i use to use this site a lot cause i had a lot going on in my life so i had a lot to say/express and now i go on again from time to time kinda like you and i was just skimming through some old comments and i found yours from my poem "behind these brown eyes" and i love what u said... im sorry if it was a long time ago but really im glad someone else feels that way and it just makes me feel a whole lot better that the events that happened... happened when it did instead of later on in life anyway lol sorry im rambling |
Thanks =) |
by Incognito
Wow that was great |