Dreams

by bucky   Jan 3, 2005


When all hope is lost and your faith has been defeated
regain it back for this is the time that it will be most needed.

Though the odds are not in you favour you mustn’t give in
you could turn this around, you could do it, you could win.

It may look impossible but it isn’t as hard as it seems you can do it, you were born to, it’s in your genes
just remember to listen to your heart but most importantly to follow your dreams.

© John Buckwheat 2004

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  • 19 years ago

    by bucky

    yea i really like this one so i might expand it

  • 19 years ago

    by Luke

    excellent poem. well written. usually long lines dont rhyme well but you totally pulled it off! good job

  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    it flows well,i like your rhyming, especially in the first verse because it is very original. it seems to lack a personal touch, it just seems to be able to relate better.... very good job! i enjoyed it!
    4/5
    kt

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Make it longer!! It's really good and it flows perfectly! There just needs to be more! =D

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Make it longer!! It's really good and it flows perfectly! There just needs to be more! =D

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