Excellent poem! Such a good message, for young girls especially. They see what's on TV and in magazines and they think that's how they should look. But the truth is its all air brushed! What an awesome poem with such a strong message....Keep it up and take care. Glad to hear you got back to reality!! :)

Thank you everyone for ur uplifting comments
Thanks to Chloe Lim who goes to my Sunday Skool and all the other girls thank you for constantly telling me I'm beautiful and that i can sing good (dunno if they r telling the truth about that) God made us all unique but he made us all beautiful in our own ways

wow great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so true i feel the pressure alot its not fair on us girls society sucks!!!!! be yourself dont care what any one els thinks!!!!!!!!!! great poem so inspirational!!!!!!
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bec xXx

hey wow great poem i agree with yaaa i loved it i love the mesge u wrote at the end it was awsome :D
peace

It is the inside that matters not the outside. If thats all a guy wants is perfection then he is shallow.Glad to hear ur boyfirend told u the truth. Exellent job on this poem and so true.

Great job! and I'm so happy to hear that you found that beauty is from the inside... sometimes "societies" most beautiful people are ugly because of thier personalities. Well keep up your good writing and you faith in God, He loves us just the way we are and made us this way for a reason. thanks for commenting on my poem it means alot!
God bless,
erica*