thanks 4 ur comment friend this poem is more than poem 2 me .
im in kolkata now.

Chavi,that poem was very heartfelt and touching andyet powerfull.It brought me to the brink of tears!Keep writing and i will keep reading.And fret not your cousin sis is in paradise now!!!Just keep up the writing.
Your friend,
Anthony Q.

thank u all i don have words how gratified i feel after reading ur comments.
i will try best 2 improve myself n u all must help me wid ur honest comments.

--chavii--

i know she is in paradise coz tats the place where angels like her must rest.

I feel sorry for the loss of your cousin...Sad and quiet touching poem...Good to see another Indian...Hope to read more of your poems in future...and i also like your quotes...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

Im sorry abt what befell ur cousin ..must hav been a difficult time.

You have brought out ur love for ur sis in this poem..well written.
May her soul rest in peace.
-Rakesh.

I m sorry (thats all i can say)
Beautifully written

take care

Your poems are more like stories than poems, but I can't rate them lower than a five, because of how much soul and caring you put into your writing, that deserves a five because writing from the heart and soul beats simply writing or even writing with advanced literatary techniques or vocabulary. Nice job.

-Tainted Mikochan