Comments : Every time you are near

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Brilliant poem hun!! i love you! xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    i love you! xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    God, you two make me wanna cry! lol! You're like the PERFECT couple! Grr.......lol. I hate you both, but I can't help but look up to both of you. You both write FANTASTIC!! poetry, and you're not like jerks like a lot of people I know!!!! AND....I can't forget,....you never forget to say I love you when you leave a message thing!! lol! I love reading your conversations!!! They're....amazing. lol! Sorta stalkerish? haha....sorry. Anyways, this was GREAT!! GREAT!!!! I really loved it! 5/5!

    p.s. Part of the deal of getting my internet back is that I don't go on the message boards! So, comments are appreciated!!

    Take care!

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    WOW Thank you so much, and dont worry, i dont think you are a stalker lol :P I will check out some more of your poms hun, :) Thank you :) xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Hahahahhah i just realized that it's screwed up this time!! Grr...it looked good when I did it. lol. Lemme try again

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    I hope that comes out better! We'll see.

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Nope. It sucks. lol.

    *referring to my horrible facial figure. I think I shud stick with the little :-) signs.*

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    i'm sure you'll get them working, lol, yeah, she is really sweet, i dont know where i would be without her :-) xx thanks xxx yeah sure i will check it out, i lok forward to it! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Good lord Oli, you're extremely sweet. You haven't been mean to me once, no offense, but I was sort of expecting it. My obnoxious behaviour sometimes gives me what I deserve, which is what I have been towards you and Toni. I think of so many things that I want to say to the both of you, but 4 some reason it's really hard. I run out of things to say. And still, despite my lack of intelligence in our conversations, you're both really kind to me. Thank you for that! It really means a lot to me!!

    ~Sierra

    p.s. just thought you ought to know.

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    Thank you :) it means a lot to me too :) thankx xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    haha you're welcome! xoxo

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    awwwww wish someone luvd me as much as u obviously luv her, great poem
    ellie
    xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Court

    that was an excellent poem!! great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    i love her with all my heart, would never stop!

    Ellie - you'll find that one person i know it :) it may take time, but you will find that guy who will love you to bits :D he's out there, probably looking for you :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla

    hello,
    Wow...what a great poem...words cant describe how great it is. i am quite jealous after reading though...i wish it was that way for everyone...:(! anyways...i am happy for you and your girl!!! good luck to the both of you and great poetry...dont stop writting!!! luv yas mwah!!!

    -kayla-

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    thank you :) x