Comments : Transparent Pervert

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    well yes it does because it should belong under love yet its kinda creepy so it goes under misc...

  • 19 years ago

    by HJ

    I agree with you.

    I thought it was a great poem, it touches on the boundaries on the unknown.

    Through words you able to express everything and anything and it is up to the reader to understand it how they will...Poerty is art afterall...Words that creat the picture in the readers mind.

    Please check out some of my recent work also a poem entitled "dirty secrets". I would love to get your opinion.

    Thanks
    Happy New Year
    Hayley