hey i like this one too its dope i like how u end a sentense and continue on from it its unique u gotta cool style man if your poetry doesnt make sense to some people then that doesnt make sense and i think those people just dont have any sense in them there mind is too narrow but i for one have an open mind to anything. peace

WOW thats some stong emotion.

hey dis is a good poem n alot of ppl can relate 2 it. good job aii keep em comin=)

Wow you've really got a knck for this aint ya! another really good one i loved it keep em cummin! :-D xXx

Wow this poem had strong emotions in it!!! wow nice one!