School

by Nathan   Jan 4, 2005


Erm quite alot of early life is dedicated to schooling so i decided to place it here(sorry mods if its wrong eeek)

There is a place i have to go,
In wind and rain sleet and snow,
I go there nearly every day,
Which doesn't leave much time to play,
Work work work thats all we do,
Reading writing adding too,
At meal times the meals are grim,
Perhaps thats why I'm rather thin,
But so its worth the trip each day,
Education is the way,
So feed your mind and don't feel sad,
Perhaps the meals here aren't to bad.

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  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    I think this is in the right category.

    It is very well written, too! Took me right back to my school days!

    I think the one thing I'd consider changing is the following line:

    "At meal times the meals are grim,"

    I think might be improved by making it:

    "At meal times the food is grim,"

    keep up the great work!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Nathan

    heheh kewlies, im all pretty new to this, eek gonna write some more soonish :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Nathan

    aww thanks chic what you mean by style, i just write what pops into my head hehe thaaank youuuuuu

    Nathan

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