aww thanks chic what you mean by style, i just write what pops into my head hehe thaaank youuuuuu

Nathan

heheh kewlies, im all pretty new to this, eek gonna write some more soonish :)

I think this is in the right category.

It is very well written, too! Took me right back to my school days!

I think the one thing I'd consider changing is the following line:

"At meal times the meals are grim,"

I think might be improved by making it:

"At meal times the food is grim,"

keep up the great work!!