My Best Enemy

by morbidangel69   Jan 4, 2005


He tells me he loves me,
He tells me he cares,
He says he's my best friend,
And that our love will never end.
But I know he doesn't love me,
He's not my best friend, he's my best enemy.

This isn't done yet but tell me how its coming and any suggestions?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Libby M

    I thought you have a good start...Sometimes when i write, I try to close my eyes and imagine what I want to write..sometimes when you see something-it would be easier for you to write and find the words to...Good Luck.

    P.S. Thanks for the comment on my poem. Hope you continue to read my work.

    Five.

    Libby

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