Dont Let Go

by Tarikins   Jan 4, 2005


This is to all the people who feel down on life
Life gets tough but don't turn to the knife
Fight back prove your stronger, don't give up so soon
Don't quit on me now when your life is so new

Don't you want to have someone that would care?
Don't give up yet, even if the world is unfair
Pull your head up and fight back
The world is cruel but don't let it throw you off track

Think about all the fun it has to offer, be a rock star
Don't take a knife, don't let pain leave its scar
Wear a smile, wipe away your tears and start again
Try and be happy don't focus on the pain

Find a friend to talk to
Even if you don't think it, someone out there cares about you
Talk to a stranger, they too know the pain
But most looked up and fought again

Don't be so easily taken
You're not alone, you're not forsaken
Take my hand and step into the light
Together we're stronger, together we'll fight

* There are lots of people out there who don't want to live any longer....I wrote this so maybe they'd stay and grow old along with us. I also wrote this for myself. I am partly suicidal...I admit I have tried. But I am fighting back and I hope this will make you stronger and to help you fight back also. -Cryptic

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ixora

    im sorry to regretful infrom you but i dont find your poem much help. i ahve tried these things. ive found no hope. the human race is ment for pain. i was suicidal until one day i read "dance with the devil" by sherrilyn kenyon...the charecter Zarek was much like me...but in a way it helped n pissed me off. he didnt commit suicide cuz it was the one thing that made them all happy...thats why i didnt do it...if u want im me on aim my sn is blackgavran...

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Great poem, gives abit of hope in all these depressing poems, well written, take care xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Shadowed_Thoughts

    great job hun i loved ti keep it up! sissy lol-krystal