Hmm.. You know if you write this poem under the explict ones you can write the word the right way. That's the only fault in this poem. But maybe less of the word would bring more sense into the poem.

pretty good poem, nice rhymes =), 5/5 to bring the rating up, it doesn't deserve a 3
-Erica

(BTW i mean it deserves better than a three, not worse, just to let you know)

i like it i like it alot. keep up the work. your talented. hugs and kisses-hayley-