Dont leave me...

by Nathan   Jan 4, 2005


Waiting for your call, the softness of your voice don't say no
The thought of that makes me sad cold as snow,

Feeling alone..in this room, looking round its empty just me,
You are the one, make me happy unlock me like a key,

Resting in bed to clear the thoughts inside my head,
When we talk again IL keep on smiling my cheeks are red.

Until then i wish you goodbye, love you until we meet,
I'll look you in the face not at my feet.

Trapped in this game of love, should i feel this confused and bad?
I'll make you happy, make you smile, the life you never had.

I'm here in your prayers, thinking of you all the time......
Don't get mad, don't feel sad, loving you is not a crime.

I cant help the way i feel..
Is this a dream or is it real.

This poem has now gone on too long, short and sweet I'll leave it be
just want you to be with me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Another really great poem, Nathan....

    I think it could use a little polishing though... the lines seem a little choppy and... I don't know... thrown together... I'm sorry if this seems harsh, it is not meant to be at all...

    You have some great ideas in this, and with a little work will be awesome!

    I can email you with some suggestions if you like.... (via private message if you have that enabled)

  • 19 years ago

    by Nathan

    eeek thankky youuuu ps check mail ;) lol, yeah working on this new poem, love poem, but with a slightly different style.