Oh that was good. It's not often you read a poem about the things happening nowadays. Good job!

~Ciao Lipton

THat is soooooooooooooooo sweet! I love it!
~M

A worthy peice of recognition and respect to those who parished in the disaster. A tragic subject to write a piece on, therefore the more beautiful. I really, really admired the lines,
"So an unconfirmed amount of souls
Unwillingly gave away their lives
And somewhere on a lonely ocean
A lonesome baby survives"
The souls unwiling to give away their lives, I just thought that was so sadly beautiful, Great job