that was a really great poem. very descriptive. i really liked it. your great with words, great with choosing the right ones for that moment. nice job. keep it up.

your an awsome poet great work. that and it describes how one really feels about suicide, thats how i feel to much of the time, but really great poem

That is one of the best poems I have read since I began writing and reading on this site. I am completely amazed. I really liked it. Im at a loss of words. Excellent job!
Rachelx

This poem kicked ass...i mean you have talent..keep it up...I think this is by far one of the best poems that ive ever read...ive juss started puttin some of my stuff on here..so yeah..i look up ta you with your writin..!

good!! 5/5 --joann

Thats so sad. but great