by Chrissy Jan 4, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
I love the way |
This is an extremely cute little poem.. i love it soooo much! great job.. the only thing i would have you change is in lines five and six.. make it so that it fits the pattern of the rest of the poem.. but it is really good |
I really enjoyed this poem, its very created, and expresses alot of feeling, its very well written, and i personally really like it! but i was wondering if maybe you could comment and or vote on my new poem called "White Silk Dress" if its not too much trouble! Thanks, sarah jenkins! |
by Jasmine
I feel the same way about my boyfriend so I can relate..It was a different poem form than I am used to but i liked it..Take Care ~Jasmine~ |