Not quite as fond of this poem as others i've read. Not sure why really, I think sometimes you're just putting tings in because it rhymes, not because it's how you feel. Like the idea, not the execution. Sorry. Take care.

I really enjoyed this poem, its very created, and expresses alot of feeling, its very well written, and i personally really like it! but i was wondering if maybe you could comment and or vote on my new poem called "White Silk Dress" if its not too much trouble! Thanks, sarah jenkins!

WOW! Those are the exact words I just want to throw at my boyfriend! I appreciate this poem because I can completely relate, I just haven't been able to find the right words to explain it. I love it, honestly.