Response to "Diamond in the Rough" by Aken Sol.

I enjoyed this one, though I found the "ebbing quietly" to seem at odds with the culminating point. Ebbing quietly would be more similar to dying in silence, than surviving secretly.

Beautiful. I love the symbolism portrayed in such a naturaly beautiful way and how it was related to objects of nature. I especially admired the last two lines, it really adds a lovley glimmer of hope and inspiration to the piece, good job

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