by FireCracker Jan 5, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
New Year |
by Robyn Park
A nicely written piece, that expresses itself well. I liked the ending, because to me, it seemed like you were saying "Yeah, you feel happy and light and joyful at the beginning of every new year, but that feeling doesn't last." Kind of made me think that people should try to hold on to it that much more powerfully. Anyway, Awesome poem. |
by Nobia
hey nice poemm keep it up! n thanx for commentin on mine. see ya... |
This is a koo poem.. nicely writen and true... I agree<<< ;) |
That was great, thanks that helped me, because i found myself cryin tonight over something that happen a few months ago and your poem just helped me relize that i need to forget, and move on cause that he doesnt matter anymore thanks alot that was great |
by brandy
i love it and it is hard that every year goes by so fast.and thanx for pointing that out maybe now i'll love every minute. love your poems and thanx again for commenting. |