by FTS Miles Jan 5, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
Sixteen years to attain some |
by Amilo
Nice! I really like this one... although the rhyme scheme is oddly absent, and at times I lost focus, I really enjoyed reading that. At some parts it was a bit confusing and choppy, too... but overall it was great. |
by ChildofGod87
Wow...Very Good Poem! I liked it alot:) Keep it up! *5/5*... |
by Gemma Sinead Hayward
critically astounding |
by Ann Stareyes
A very beautiful poem. Very well written. lol |
by Sean Allen
Wow that was good. I can't really think of any criticism... I, uh... Well I'm glad this poem was written. |