Awesome!!! Couldnt say it better in 'Until Shiloh comes' GBU for this lovely insight and heart provoking poem. Way to go!!!!

Great read! I loved the flow.
You truely have a vernacular and elliptical of your own.

Please check my new piece, I would be very interested in your opinion.
Thank you for your comments on my other pieces.

Kind regards
Happy New Year
Hayley