i can''t beleieve someone hasn't left a comment on this poem IT is awsome
you can really write poems. I loved the words u used it is more worth then a 5

I definately have to agree with alyson! This was a very interesting poem...awesome job, you're a GREAT writer keep up the good work!

wow i loved it! seriously i liked how you kept a constant rythme the whole time! wish i could do that, but my mind wonders! ha!

This one is really great! Very imaginative and great details!

Wow, i thought this was really good~! Keep up the good work!

Luv Alwayz,
Katie Schettler

An interesting piece, with good use of description.

Keep Writing
Nici

This is truly deep, dark but amazing. The rhymes were really good, and the images are frightful. It gives it a lot of power. A great piece :)
5/5

- Darien

Wow, good job.

Nice one huni

This is amazing, i love it, u r so tallented!
love u sammy