i think it is very good...REALLY...the best on here i have read by you..and i feel the weather has something to do w/ mood too...dont discourage urself on this poem...u get a 5 from me!! and girl thank ya for the comment...u made me smile...arent u juss a doll..God bless <3 Heather Craig

If it expresses feelings..It has it's own way of being excellent..

Awesome writing..Keep going..

Chris..
5

Not good?yes ill call u crazy for thinking that its not good..lolz..i loved it since i can relate to it lots..great job and keep it up..by the way,thx for ur comment.
*XoX Sw33ti3*

hey girl!! you may think this poem is bad but it's really good! i like it alot, and u know how u said your gettin use to these new features well me too i figured some stuff out but like it's still like ummmm lol

ttyl take care ~lil slam~

awesome job! I really like it.. ! A++!
-K

Hey, this is good!! and thatz true...i like it!! thatz really cool, and ur not crazy lol, itz awesome!! keep it up and take care!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

me likey. but it wont let me vote anymore.. WAHH!!.. good JOB =]

i really liked the poem i agree with you by the way its true the weather does have its own personality well thanks for your comment muched appreciated x

It's Great..Whatcha talking about?!?!Lol

Chris

Hey ! THANKS 4 ur comment on my poem, it meant alot, i was glad to hear from u .. but neway this was a gr8 poem, keep it up !!!
=D

Great poem! The words fit together so well and its soo good! Excellent work!! Keep it up!
Shannon