AMAZING! It truely is, I think so many people can relate to it. It's strange, I don't usually enjoy poetry that doesn't rhyme, but this is lovely. Sorry for my commas :) Take care.

This is sad, but lovely poem. Take 5**** and make sure you keep writiing ok?

I love the repetition. A definite 5 from moi.

I'm not gonna sit down and write a poem about why, as well as being very cliched its whiny and stupid. Everyone has their reasons. And I'm not gonna commit suicide anyways, it' just a stupid poem.

"No Incognito, don't do it!!!!" *paperdoll weeps uncontrollably, restained by a consoling body-guard* "It's not worth it!!!"

Alright, generally suicide poems make me ill, but I found this one chillingly enjoyable. Nice repetition at the start and I loved the effect of the last line.

Also currently liking your other poems. Do, keep it up and stay away from pointy objects. (That's what I'm told to do, anyway.) Cheers,

-paperdoll

that was a really good poem, i loved it from beginning to end! awesome write, keep it up! x x x x

THUMBS UP! all the way hun! this was amazing!

Excellent poem, i really like the way you wrote this, it definately puts amessage across to the readers. Thankfully it is not true, take care and thanks for the comments...