Sorry Angels

by deadnalone   Jan 5, 2005


I know this isn't very structured and doesn't have a clear consistent rhyme pattern and i know if i just say that I'll probably get comments saying no, its good but you do have to admit....

Okay so you think you know me?
You seen scars and you think you know who i am?
You think like there's nothing else worth knowing,
You just don't get it, you don't understand,
You've never been there and seen me cry,
You've never tried to understand why,
You've never cared and you never will,
You just carry on with your making me ill,
You aren't the only one who got me down,
But when I'm trying to climb back up,
You just push me down and turn me around,
You are not the source of my depression,
I'm a lot better; I've learned a lesson,
But you need to learn one more than i,
You need to stop making other people cry,
To be honest everyone makes someone cry,
Even if sometimes they don't know why,
But not everyone pushes someone to the blade,
An object so persuading that takes you far from aid,
You don't care though; you don't cut,
There's no reason for you to think about it,
You're just a stupid ignorant s!ut,
Just leave me here,
With my blades and my marks,
Leave me here,
With my fat and your remarks,
I'll be fine,
Just go away,
Let me make no new cuts,
Please not today,
God why is all this pushing me?
Toward the blade,
Why can't i look and see?
See all that is keeping me here,
My boy and my girls,
That took away my fear,
This is breaking me,
Hard and fast,
If i stay like this,
I just won't last,
I will try,
To hold on tight,
I'll keep on gripping,
With all of my might,
But if someone comes,
And stands on my hand,
Please show my friends,
Make them understand,
I tried to hold on so tight,
For all of them,
To help fight their fights,
And to be their friend,
But if i let go,
It wasn't from lack of love,
It was from a lack of strength,
That i should have from above,
But I'm sorry angels,
Both far and near,
Sorry if i go,
Sorry if i can't fight my fear.

*All comments and votes greatly appreciated as always.*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is really good, and this is soo true, i can relate to almost the whole thing, keep on writing, and take care...
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 19 years ago

    by kelsielaroche

    its good, im giving you a 5, i can relate to it a lot, just screw whoever did this to you, find your real friends....and hang on, it gets better.. xxoxoo
    roxykels41

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    I relli hope that u hang on hun, and no matter what u thort of it, i thought it was brilliant, probably one of the best cos u can tell it came straight from ur heart. We'll help u pull through hun, please dont give up all ur angels need you hun, im here for u anytime xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    amazing just fantastic doesnt matter about the structure i loved every bit of it well done keep up the great workx

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    heya babe, like sed erlier, ur d beta 1, by miles. fab poem, rely frm the heart.

    always here 4 ya, -x-x-x-x-x-x-