Don't Go Back To Sleep

by kelsey   Jan 5, 2005


The breeze at dawn has secrets to tell you

Don't go back to sleep

You must ask for what you really want

Don't go back to sleep

People are going back and forth across the door sill, where the two worlds touch.The door is round and open

Don't go back to sleep

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  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Short, but very interesting, very strong. I like the repitition and without the rhyming. It creates a tense motion in a calm atmosphere.
    Well written, i enjoyed that, 5/5
    luv kt