Way past saving

by Shadowed_Thoughts   Jan 5, 2005


I cant keep doing this
pretending I'm OK
hiding the real me in the dark shadows

now i shall cry these crimson tears
and cry so many

making my wish come true
to die tonight
this angel is way past saving

i cant keep hiding my pain with these
fake smiles and wristbands

so i will say my goodbye
and please no one cry
let go of me I'm not worth saving

these lies have taken control
my past is to hard to hide

this angel is way past saving

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  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    this is a great poem, really liked it. keep holding on for a better day, lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is really good, i gave it a 5... i can relate to this, keep on writing, take care!
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 19 years ago

    by Tarikins

    OK now I'm really freakin worried....your my twinsie and I love you soooooo much if I found out you were hurt I will lose myself completely.
    Cryptic

  • 19 years ago

    by Gill

    aaww this is a really good poem..do u actually feel that way? bcuz i hav friends that do..and it's really hard on the friends to..they dun wanna see theyre friends go...and even if it is true it was an awesome poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Awww hunnie...nooo....Brilliant write hun...but it's not hopeless, trust me, it isn't...I believe in you hun...I do...I added your e-mail...Hope it worked?...xxxx Please take care and keep writing...Stay strong, please. xxxxxxxxx <3

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

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