by Ã맆îñ¥ Jan 5, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
I’m stuck in a rut |
This one I like how it is short and too the point with a snap. But most of the poems I've seen have been pretty short. Just a suggestion but, maybe making the lines longer or more stanzas would bring better ratings and comments. But this poem was nice short. |
I've already told you my thoughts on this, and they haven't changed :) |