Help(Tanka)

by Lance Hardy   Jan 5, 2005


Friends are always there
To show you they love and care
But not when needed

Whenever you need some help
Deep inside, it's there for you
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Probably my worst tanka yet.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    thats pretty good!! sry i havent been on lately...i've been busy busy. if you have time will you check out my new poem? i wrote it kinda different. thank you bunchies!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I would avoid rhymes in tankas, but it wasn't that bad.

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